Hey everyone! My names Adam and this is my blog, please feel free to take a look around! Thanks for taking a look!
You need to make the video public. It is set to private.
Nice job, your essay is very nice. One suggestion is that you turn down the background music, sometimes its hard to hear you.
Very nice Video essay. You had good images that fit the topics you were talking about :)! Good job. The background music was a little high sometimes but I could still hear you fine.
This is great, your thoughts were fluent and thought provoking, although you did talk very quick. Also the music is a little distracting. But overall, great job.
I really liked it, great tone and the essay was well thought out and delivered great. If I had to make one critic though, it would be that the music was a bit to loud, which came up as a problem for me as well. But overall a solid job.
Nice Job Adam! I really liked the flow of the of the video and the transitioning. I just wish the music was softer so i could hear more of your voice
Very nice job Adam! Great video, but the background music was a little loud. But great job!
Music could have been a little quieter but at least you have it which I dont
Great job Adam! Like a lot of others, please turn down the background music, sometimes it's hard to hear you!
This was overall a great video essay but there are however a few things that you could fix. Like Ali said, your background music is a little bit loud. Also, the delivery is slightly monotonous. I did love the pictures though as well as the main message of your essay.
An American, Indian Chia Drinking Thinker who thinks about things.